In the "zip" form developed by John Carley, a haiku of 15 syllables
is presented over two lines, each of which contains one internal
caesura represented by a double space.
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- buoyed up on the rising tide
- a fleet of head boards bang the wall
- John Carley (Magma No 19, 2001)
A fixed-form 5-3-5 syllable (or 3-5-3 word) haiku is sometimes known as a
lune.
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